lifes a pitch - Sensorama

For our group, i was asked to create a logo that captured the essence of retro to incorporate the theme of the original Virtual Reality machine (senosorama) for our presentation. the presentation itself went really well and we got a really good amount of feedback to help us further our plan to showcase our work.

OG text on a slant is grabbing me

Also can you try a parallelogram that is tighter to the text, rather than a big triangle?

Presentation